T4 math

i have  to move to stage four now i did not inprove

Day by Dead

Name Brian
Date wendesday the oct 24

Wahlt: sumaris the story.

There was a girl who mum had pastaway she had went to go see hir mum she had fell threw 
The ground she had seen three skelltons playing songs she was scare when she fell threw that hole and the hole was pitch black she was scared of the graves that she was in  the hole with all the other people she had seen hir mum she had pull hir leg out of hir body and tride to hit the pinneyuder but she mist hir shoct of hiting it the little girl grab some boydey leg and hit the pennyunter then hir mum came and she hug hir then she came back up to the ground  

hip hop dace moves

I felt that i had no bones in my body becasue wir dasing to the songs that she played we played follow the leader it was fun because we had to make up eney dacemoves we only made up four dacemoves  

Term 4 week one

1.     I thing that is hould inprove in my maths because im gowing down a level and I have not inprove